Paper is good, keep most information, just need to make the paper less repetitiv

Paper is good, keep most information, just need to make the paper less repetitive with the info, addd in a paragraph as to how we can prevent this from happening to teens in the future or what we can do now to reduce use of social media / unrealistic expectations, also add in another source or two when adding new, not repetitive info to do with the research question

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