i need this draft paper to be improve and sharp, two of my professor left commen

i need this draft paper to be improve and sharp, two of my professor left comments for the paper to be better. one of them left note which i took some screenshot and the other professor left comments on word document i will upload both of them. you wrote this paper not to long ago. thank you

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